supacat ([info]supacat) wrote,
@ 2003-07-08 01:53:00
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What you get (Viggo/Orlando - snippet)


What you get

In a thoughtless, surface way, Orlando liked everyone. If you asked him about Elijah, he'd say something like, "Oh yeah, I really respect Elijah. He's so courageous, you know? He's doing such an incredible job." He'd be animated and smiling as he tossed off the comment, and he'd already be thinking about something else.

Viggo had taken Orlando seriously at first, to the point of feeling the prickling beginnings of--something--the night that they'd gone for a drink and Orlando had told him, "I'm so drawn to you. There's this intensity about you that's just really attractive." Until he'd noticed that Orlando could be elsewhere, signaling for a beer or smiling at the waitress at the same time as saying something like that. Then he had taken a step back.

The language of the hobbits was slamming each other and there Orlando was the odd man out. Sure, when he got insulted he'd swear back but he'd be laughing too, like he couldn't quite believe it, and before long he'd be back to his usual, throwing his arm around Billy and telling him, "Billy Boyd, man. You are like the best friend a guy could have."

Orlando liked surfaces, Viggo thought, exteriors; his affability was genuine because he didn't think long enough about other people to dislike them. He got on brilliantly with the hobbits, especially Dom and Elijah. They had a lot in common: foremost the ability to form friendships with others before they understood themselves.

Viggo was closer with Sean Bean and members of the production team. Not a conscious decision, he simply gravitated toward his interests and peers. With the younger, more extroverted members of the cast Viggo relaxed into silence, listening--smiling sometimes as the hobbits set up long, running gags with one another.

So it was a surprise when Orlando started to seek him out, but then on reflection it wasn't. Perhaps Orlando had felt a prickling of--something--from Viggo too. Distance. A different kind of distance than Viggo maintained from the hobbits. A distance that to Orlando's mind must be corrected, because Orlando courted everyone into closeness, all the time, even Peter.

He was on Viggo's couch, in his trailer.

"We hardly ever hang out, Viggo, man. This is cool."

"Is it?"

"Just today, Elijah was saying how you guys went down to Hamilton and I was like, it's been too long since I talked to Viggo, really talked, you know, like, as if you're avoiding me or something." Orlando flashed a smile, because of course this could not possibly be true.

"I'm not avoiding you."

"Right. You're like the mystery guy, though. You're so--you know. I can't get my head around it."

Viggo smiled at that, couldn't help it. Orlando took the smile as encouragement and the silence as a reason to keep talking. He was about as far from Legolas as it was possible to get: tousled brown hair, limbs sprawled haphazardly. He was good looking and very young. Liv had proved on set that beauty and immaturity didn't make her stupid or a bad actress. Orlando, on the other hand--in all honesty, Viggo wasn't quite sure where Orlando's limitations lay, but they certainly existed, very tangibly, though Viggo possessed a strong desire to imagine them away because Orlando was so attractive.

Twisting a shred of paper between his fingers, Orlando said, "We're good, aren't we?"

"We're good," said Viggo.

Viggo didn't form facile friendships, he wasn't the type. He just watched as Orlando talked about nothing entertainingly and at great length; meanwhile he kept one eye on the time and when it slid past midnight he stood and murmured that it was late.

"Yeah, this was great though," said Orlando, rising and stretching. He smiled at Viggo. "Listen, I'd really like to do this again, you know? Just you and me. Sometime."

It was cold when Viggo opened the door of the trailer. It was a cold night.

"I'm serious about, if you, I mean--I--because tonight was, like, really--"

"Orlando--" A single note of worn patience slipped into his tone.

It was only awkward for a moment.

"Okay. Okay, well, whatever's okay. I know you're--anyway."

Orlando waved at him on set the next day and called him, "Viggo the man," and they were good, Viggo thought wryly, because Orlando was good with everyone.



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[info]thewriter0
2003-07-07 03:36 pm UTC (link)
.....You know, I HATE how you can write stuff I would never, ever read under normal circumstances, and yet I read it anyway and then want to weep at its uber-goodness.

Life is so unfair.

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[info]supacat
2003-07-09 12:42 am UTC (link)
*^_^* Thanks! That's a really lovely compliment which this snippet totally doesn't deserve. (blush!)

(You shouldn't give up on LotR RPS fandom! The writers in that fandom are MILLIONS of times better than me).

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[info]thewriter0
2003-07-09 05:37 am UTC (link)
*^_^* Thanks! That's a really lovely compliment which this snippet totally doesn't deserve. (blush!)

Sure it does! All your stuff deserves compliments! Unless you, like, start writing Pokemon slash. Then I'm afraid I'll have to curl up in a corner and weep fearfully.

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[info]petronia
2003-07-07 10:02 pm UTC (link)
Back! With fic! *waves pom-poms*

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Uh huh... yay!
[info]supacat
2003-07-09 12:44 am UTC (link)
Back! Send me that thing! *steals pom poms*
^_^

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;_;
[info]kuro_akumu
2003-07-08 12:23 am UTC (link)
Are YOU avoiding ME, though? I`ve called like... 6 times, tried to e-mail.... *sigh* Still no keitai for me, but.

Maybe talk to you someday? :T

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Forgive Cat?
[info]supacat
2003-07-09 12:48 am UTC (link)
Augh! It's true. I'm barely back on the net... scary deadlines mean have no life, no net, just work, 8am-midnight, like, totaly salaryman style. *meeps* Got your note!

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[info]kitsune_kitana
2003-08-06 11:01 am UTC (link)
Just curious - was this random thought meandering or something you picked up about Orlando Bloom and wanted to embellish on? I've noticed - when I thought back on interviews, articles or whatnot - how OB always seems to have something of that "thoughtless, surface" nature to say about his fellow actors (although upon reflection, that sounds harsh ^^;;). I've never been able to put my finger on what it was; whatever it is, you described it nicely here: "He'd be animated and smiling as he tossed off the comment, and he'd already be thinking about something else." Anyway, interesting snippet.

Did I mention that I just came back from a study in Japan? I was only in Tokyo for three days, though, before we proceeded to our actual destination (off Okinawa and truly closer to Taiwan than mainland Japan). Pre-arrival, I was horribly embarassed at the thought of meeting any online friends in Japan (and face the reality of just *how* mediocre my Japanese is?). Post-arrival, I was too sick from the humidity and heat to go out and do anything anyway. *dies* I am so ashamed.

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Sweetie!!!
[info]supacat
2003-09-11 05:06 am UTC (link)
You were in Tokyo and didn't email me????? ;_; NEXT TIME you must! We can play and enjoy human watching and chase cute boys (or girls) together. ^_^

Thanks for kind words about snippet!

Just curious - was this random thought meandering or something you picked up about Orlando Bloom and wanted to embellish on?

It was the FotR commentary, where Orlando always seemed to be saying, "Oh IAN is such a FANTASTIC ACTOR, he is like, so, you know, like, FANTASTIC and stuff."

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[info]ukcalico
2003-08-23 06:56 am UTC (link)
Tuning in late but OH, zounds!

What magnificent pov. What sleek, naturally lean dialogue. What ust.

There are so few stories where Viggo's objections feel Viggo-y - but this brims with interesting mature meditative apt-feeling detail, and succinctly encapsulates a lot of my feelings for the pairing re: Orlando's bright-burning fast-rising stardom.

Rrrrow. ::rereads::

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[info]supacat
2003-09-09 10:33 pm UTC (link)
Me late too!
Because, I am stuck in a cursed airport.

Hey you, YOU are the only reason I even know about this fandom!

re: Orlando's bright-burning fast-rising stardom

I really like characters who don't connect, so very happy to pair Deep Meaningful with Total Flake. ^_^v

Thanks for rec - so many people clicked your link and left comments! Definitely not used to this. (looks around, stunned)

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[info]ukcalico
2003-09-11 02:55 am UTC (link)
Prepare to be rec'd any time you air something like this, man. sheesh. ;)

I really like characters who don't connect, so very happy to pair Deep Meaningful with Total Flake. ^_^

It's a splendid, splendid, squirm-worthily mismatched pairing, under your knife pen. And even for me, the eternal V/O sap, this is already proving a lovely one to reread.

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[info]wyoluvr
2003-08-23 08:07 am UTC (link)
oh, this was wonderful! thank you so much for writing it.

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[info]supacat
2003-09-09 10:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the comment, undeserved. Now very happy! ^_^v

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[info]ethrosdemon
2003-08-23 09:46 am UTC (link)
Yeah, this is brilliant. The first time I've ever seen Orlando presented as I think he probably really is. Viggo is also so real in such a short space: adult, watchful, alert, tired. All of that.

I adore the misplaced attraction and Viggo's giving in to Orlando's friendship deluge.

Wonderful, wonderful. Do you have more fic?

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Sankyuuuuu! *^_^*
[info]supacat
2003-09-11 05:00 am UTC (link)
The first time I've ever seen Orlando presented as I think he probably really is.

I like pretty shallow people very much (Why???) so am very happy to write him that way.

Do you have more fic?

(shyly) Fic is here, but! Mainly Japanese fandoms. -_-;;;;

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[info]lady_of_asheru
2003-08-23 10:00 am UTC (link)
Very, very, nice indeed.
S

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[info]supacat
2003-09-10 07:58 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! So happy you enjoyed it. *^_^*

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[info]lobelia321
2003-08-23 01:44 pm UTC (link)
I hate Viggorli.

I love your fic.

I read because recced by [info]calico and it is fucking brilliant. This is so *real*: the real Orlando, the real Viggo. I can *hear* this dialogue. And I am very impressed with how you manage to do both show *and* tell.

Lovely stuff. Why have I never read anything by you before?

*scuttles off to find your website*

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Abashed! *^_^*
[info]supacat
2003-09-10 09:01 pm UTC (link)
Oh! I am your fan! *^_^*
Your AU is my secret vice.

(Not so secret)

...both show *and* tell...

TV and film can only show, but text can do both and so should, I think.

Lovely stuff. Why have I never read anything by you before?

(shy) I just have a small site, and never post anywhere else. Also obscure Japanese fandoms!

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Re: Abashed! *^_^*
[info]lobelia321
2003-09-12 05:05 am UTC (link)
Ooh, why so secret? At the moment I can't post the stupid thing. In fact, I can't post or email anything that's longer than 200 words. This has been going on for a day now. Grrr.

TV and film can only show, but text can do both and so should,
I love this. Thanx!

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like. dude..like.
[info]selfinduced
2003-08-25 02:14 am UTC (link)
your orlando? is so sadly believable and yet a little part of me is screaming because no, he's not lovable and i want him to be lovable... and it's clinging to Viggo and petting him because, the shallowness. surfaces. meep.

good job.

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Sankyuuuuuuuuu *^_^*
[info]supacat
2003-09-11 04:33 am UTC (link)
Unlovable Orlando! But for the romantics - maybe this once Orlando was being genuine and Viggo just didn't realize it. I mean, you could read it that way. ^_-

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Re: Sankyuuuuuuuuu *^_^*
[info]selfinduced
2003-09-12 05:41 pm UTC (link)
yeah... *points to other reply* now that i think of that version, it's a more sweet kinda sad. heh.
though evil!Orlando is kinda a shinynewthing to unwrap and gaze at for a while, because, yes? *smirk*

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]marysiak
2003-09-11 05:16 am UTC (link)
I think he's lovable, but maybe cause I already thought that Orli was a lot like that and loved him for it anyway. I love the way he babbles, I love his excitement. Orli never fails to bring a smile to my face.

I think Viggo's mistaken though, in that I think Orli does care, he just can't stop long enough to really act on it or make it feel anything more than superficial. He's like a stream not far from the spring, constantly in free fall, but there's still the potential for depth when the terrain levels out.

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]selfinduced
2003-09-12 05:36 pm UTC (link)
eeeee. okay. i like him better now that i think of Vig being mistaken. [it almost never occurs to me to question Vig, y'know? cos he's like. god, or something...lol.]

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]marysiak
2003-09-13 11:02 am UTC (link)
Any man who eats that much chocolate is far from perfect :)

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]selfinduced
2003-09-13 11:44 am UTC (link)
chocolate? vig? where?

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]marysiak
2003-09-13 01:20 pm UTC (link)
Billy said so in an interview somewhere but i forget where. He said Viggo is always eating chocolate.

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Re: like. dude..like.
[info]selfinduced
2003-09-13 01:25 pm UTC (link)
ooooh, okays. i was thinking more like explicit pictures..possibly involving orlando as well..mmmm...lol.

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[info]childeproof
2003-08-26 02:02 am UTC (link)
This is intelligently nasty, and excellent stuff. Genuinely-Superficial OB meets Disappointed-Weary VM. Very plausible and acute, and a welcome break from all those fics where X has been in love with Y all along as well and is Very Deep and Sincere. I generally loathe this pairing, which is responsible for, frankly, enormous amounts of crap, but I'd read another by you.

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[info]supacat
2003-09-11 12:00 am UTC (link)
(blush) Intelligently nasty! Wow, thank you so much, that is high praise. *_*

Genuinely-Superficial OB meets Disappointed-Weary VM. Very plausible and acute...

Well, it's certainly very plausible that OB is genuinely superficial, um. ^_-

BUT that is his CHARM!

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[info]shadowluck
2003-11-01 10:40 pm UTC (link)
Dude, this is like, good. Like really really really good. And the characterisation is just - the characters just completely feel right.

*waves hello* Just call me a random person who found your IwtV fic and then your recs site. :)

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[info]annnimeee
2006-06-01 06:49 am UTC (link)
I can't believe how good your RPS fics are! Seriously, I had always dismissed any RPS fic that I came across before. Your fics show how ignorant I've been acting. This is terrific. I keep imagining Orlando Bloom from those interviews where he looks all cute and hot and friendly. WOw.

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